Do you know guys?, I really love my mom. I think my mom is my inspiration during ilive in the world. Because she always gives motivation and makes me struggle if i have some problem.
My mom average height. she also has bright skin. Then, she has straight and black hair. Beside that, she has a flat nose and thick lips. Her body is slim. I think her ages is 42 ages years old, but she still beautiful.
i really need her every time, because she is wise woman. she always perceptives to face problem. And i am happy if i together with her, because we have a same hobby, so i can spend my time with her. I think my mom like light who always bright my life.
My mom average height ---> My mom has average height
BalasHapusshe has straight and black hair ---> she has straight black hair
I think my mom like light who .... ---> I think my mom like a light who ......
Putri.. I think her ages is 42 ages years old,Better you write "I think she is 42 years old. "
BalasHapusAnd i am happy if i together with her : And i am happy if i am together with her
BalasHapuspunctuation
BalasHapusDo you know guys?, I really love my mom. I think my mom is my inspiration during ilive in the world. Because she always gives motivation and makes me struggle if i have some problem.
Do you know guys? I really love my mom. I think my mom is my inspiration during ilive in the world, Because she always gives motivation and makes me struggle if i have some problem.
during ilive in the world => you less space
BalasHapusyou must more consistent when you write I . because in your writing sometimes you write i sometime you write I .
thank's :)