Sabtu, 01 November 2014

A Wonderful Place
        OMG..oh how beautiful  Nusa Dua Bali Beach!, i don’t know why? I feel so comfort when i visit this place. Nusa dua  Bali is a toursm object which has a beautiful scenary.  This place very famous with a exotic beach and has calm waves, so this place very safe to use spend time with family or friend.
       Many people visit in there both local tourist or  international tourist. Nusa dua Bali not only use recreation, yet use government to hold coferrence, because close with Ngurah Rai airport and near with a center of city.
      In here also offered a good facility to water toursm like snorkling, banana boat,  and jetski. Beside that, Nusa dua Bali also provide culinary tour both traditional food or international food everything available in here. Then, you can improve your ability to speak english better with communicate directly with international tourist.  Nusa dua also provide a good hotel, so you will not worry if you stay in here.
     Interesting experience can be perceived, so guys you can try your adventure in Nusa Dua Bali another time
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6 komentar:

  1. Unknown4 November 2014 pukul 03.27

    put I think Scenary : Scenery.
    and "This place very famous with a exotic beach", If you want make it sentence You less "is" ..

    BalasHapus
  2. Unknown4 November 2014 pukul 06.22

    toursm object ---> tourism object
    famous with a exotic beach ---> famous with an exotic beach

    BalasHapus
  3. adzif4 November 2014 pukul 18.23

    excuse me, let me comment your writing please.
    after reading your writing i find some sentence that i guest it is wrong
    those are :
    1. this place very safe to use spend time with family or friend : his place is very safe to use spending time with family or friend.
    2. to hold coferrence : to hold conferrence
    3. In here also offered a good facility : In there also offered a good facility
    4. speak english better with communicate directly with international tourist : speak english better by communication directly with international tourist

    BalasHapus
  4. Inasya Fania4 November 2014 pukul 20.08

    snorkling -> snorkeling
    jetski -> jet ski

    BalasHapus
  5. Unknown9 November 2014 pukul 21.47

    so this place very safe to use spend time with family or friend. = so this place is_sh and should be without use putri..

    BalasHapus
  6. Ati' Muzdalifa9 November 2014 pukul 21.52

    This place very famous with a exotic beach and has calm waves= because Waves is Uncountable should be without "s"

    BalasHapus

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