One day Gil Zamora a FBI trained forensic artist who worked in San jose, asked to some women for describe her physical appearance. And he heard her describing, then he tried to draw with made face sketch. The women still continued her story , and he still draw.
After that, he asked the women to meet with another women and introduced her self. Then, Gill Zamora called one of the women and described to each other and etc.
Finally, he called the women to look the result. And, the women made conclusion if a beauty came from our self and can influenced in a society. So, we have to grateful with our god. Because we more beautiful than we think.
putri I think and is not usual in front. maybe better " And he heard her describing, then he tried to draw with made face sketch. " you can write without and. or you can write " he heard her describing , and then he tried to draw with made face sketch.
BalasHapus*So, we have to grateful with our god. Because we more beautiful than we think. (i think you do not need to give (.) before "because" because the sentence has a relation) may be better like this :
BalasHapus*So, we have to grateful with our god because we more beautiful than we think.